Celebrates International Women's Day: Kazakh President's Perspective
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KAZAKHSTAN - President Kassym-Jomart Tokayev commemorated International Women's Day on March 7, shining a spotlight on the indispensable contributions of Kazakh women, as reported by Akorda.
Tokayev applauded women's achievements and underscored their pivotal role in Kazakhstan's progress. He reiterated his administration's commitment to fostering equal opportunities and creating avenues for women to excel in the economic, social, and political realms. The nation's state programs are a testament to this commitment, championing gender equity and female empowerment to propel Kazakhstan towards a more equitable and progressive future.
"Half of the civil servants and over 70% of employees in education and healthcare are females. Many Kazakh citizens serve their Motherland conscientiously in emergency responses, the military, and law enforcement agencies, with more female leaders stepping forward every day," Tokayev attested.
As part of the Year of Working Professions, new state honors were unveiled to recognize the status of skilled professionals. "Nine new honorary titles now form part of the state awards system. Today, we are bestowing two such awards for the first time—Olga Sheludko, a labor veteran, has been honored as Honored Builder of Kazakhstan, while Maira Yermanova, a leading production worker, became Honored Industrialist of Kazakhstan," declared the President.
In closing, Tokayev graced women who have significantly contributed to Kazakhstan's development and distinguished themselves in their respective fields with state awards.
Insights:- President Tokayev’s Broader Empowerment Efforts: The President has spearheaded reforms to fortify institutional mechanisms safeguarding women's rights, including the enactment of legislation criminalizing domestic violence[2].
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- Amid his efforts for gender equality, President Tokayev has also highlighted the significant role of women in health-and-wellness sectors, with half of the civil servants and over 70% of employees in education and healthcare being female.
- In the realm of politics, he has shown continued support for women's rights, further strengthening institutional mechanisms that criminalize domestic violence and recognize skilled professionals, as evidenced by the new state honors awarded to Olga Sheludko and Maira Yermanova.
